Carnel City

Main Ideas
Carnel City: the city of gears.

located in the center of the modern world. While Carnel is a city state it weilds the power of a moderatly sized county.

Well renound for its inovaters Carnel is a Free city state that welcomes all kinds in droves.

Leaders: Carnel is led by its defacto ruler known as the gear master. The Gear master or lord of gears is a master of all kinds of law from across the world and is respected as a fair and just ruler even by the more unruly elements of his city.

Law enforcment: Carnel posseses three main forces armed forces. The Infantry and Mecha infantry composed mainly of combat robots which form its main arm and its clockwork angles. The clockwork angels are a copy of the churches leading agent the "angels". Despite their name the clock work refers only to whom they represent they are in fact human.

Carnel city is most famous for two 3 things first n itsis it's progressive inventive and industrial goals hence the nickname Gear, second is its unoque blend of archetecture, third despite the fact that Carnel is a dictatorship its people enjoy more freedoms then anywhere else in the world, however this leads to it being some to some "Colorful" charicters who acationally need to be reminded who is in charge.

That said Carnel is also fiercely independent to bows to no ones will sometimes not even its own hence its need for a powerful army. it should be noted that Carnel's army, while large for the city's size, does not acually compare to that of its surrounding countrys rather its troops are so well trained and so well equiped not mention backed up with weapons no other countrys have access to that makes them so powerful.

But Carnels greatest strangth is its population, diverse to the point of choas the citys inhabidents are feircly independent and copletly willing to defend it. An outside occupation force would have to do battle the the cities entire popultion.

Comments
No problems here. SPELL CHECK YOUR SHIT THOUGH. Kazegen (talk) 23:11, October 3, 2012 (UTC)

Apparently, he doesn't get spellcheck because he isn't using source, he's editing in the other way. Doesn't give him many options. I'm having more problems with the grammar and non-use of commas and such... --Araigen (talk) 19:24, October 4, 2012 (UTC)